This is good Berfin, but you need to make sure you've covered everything. - Footnotes/references: make sure you've used some articles, and not just videos and a link the wiki page for Hitchcock - For soundtrack, you need to focus on how it is actually cut with the video/film - You're missing a few conventions, such as 180 rule, splicing, withholding info... use the brief to see and make sure everything's in there - Make sure you've given an example for everything that's specific to the tv and films you're discussing
Merit.
ReplyDeleteThis is good Berfin, but you need to make sure you've covered everything.
- Footnotes/references: make sure you've used some articles, and not just videos and a link the wiki page for Hitchcock
- For soundtrack, you need to focus on how it is actually cut with the video/film
- You're missing a few conventions, such as 180 rule, splicing, withholding info... use the brief to see and make sure everything's in there
- Make sure you've given an example for everything that's specific to the tv and films you're discussing
Jo